Starting off the morning looking at our motion studies!
Critique:
-be mindful of the time it takes to read the phrase. Is it too long? Too short? It is very controversial
-Make sure there is no gaps in your composition. Still problems before animating.
-optical judging
-plain makes us uninterested and BORED. I looked away from others multiple times...oops
-dont expect motions diagonally. it's not in our understanding. it demonstrates an action, as in sizzors, a clap board, or if we had an image that will make it make sense.
-contrasts direct your eye
-problems with word spacing, letter spacing
-MAKE YOUR TYPE GRAPHICAL
-try to align tops rather than bottoms. your eye catches the top first
My critique:
-fun and interesting
-"meal that thought it was going to be bad:wasn't. that didn't expect" haha
-maybe resolution problems one one.
- maybe bring the size up so it can be readable
-good
note: take a look at Neville Brody
-graduated 79, designer
Next assignment: research display faces and use it as a graphic. use it in it's context.
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